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Valentine's day origin may seem innocent but it's quite the opposite. In the multiple articles that explain the origins of the holiday, I chose "The Dark Origins of Valentine's Day" by Arnie Seipel. I found this one appealing because it had the most intriguing title and had more life in general. Yes, all of these articles did a good job at detailing the true nature of the holiday but only one did it in an interesting way. The article "History of Valentine's day" by the history channel was well informed but overstocked with facts. There was no life to the article at all. Unlike the article written by Arnie, "The Dark Origins of Valentines Day"  had facts but also had personality in the writing. In conclusion, "The Dark Origins of Valentine's Day" outshined the other articles because it was the most unique and not bland like the others.


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  1. The blog is very short but easy to understand. The main idea is very clear. Grammar is good and very little can be found. The article needs to be more complex and well-written. It should separate article into small paragraphs to explain your views more clearly. The in-text citation needs some work.

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